someone to face the life of pants and stare at me

[hummingwolf]

I seem to be getting into a habit this year of skipping MegaPoMo one day and posting twice the next. My apologies to those of you who were hoping for a steady, daily supply of MegaHAL poetry. Anyway, since all known participants in MegaPoMo 2007* are posting this stuff to LiveJournal, I thought I'd ask HAL what he thinks about this place.

Livejournal is a locked room up there
that made the old tug
at dusk they gather
enough power to prescribe what
this new-built city from both work and play
everything's a-ok
friendly brown glass balls from which his teddy observed the world.

You know, that almost makes some kind of sense.

Silhouetted against the words,
and little streams are freighted with a friendly chicken
with a livejournal account, you can see that you will go with me.
free me from the spirit,
for casey, mighty casey, was advancing to the hudson pours,
under the light.

There's a chicken with a LiveJournal account? Or perhaps I should ask, given how many people's dogs and cats and bunny rabbits have LJs: you know of only one friendly chicken with a LiveJournal account?

Capricorn: just the facts, man. Investigate and nail down specifics
today to get from me

no other words, not all business deals and get
involved in the dance is altogether flame!

with a livejournal account, you can have the dream,

the hand of honest feedback. It's not permanent.

I'm no Capricorn, but I suspect it's time for me to quit asking now. If someone with a permanent account wants to send feedback, it's up to them.



* These participants being... well... me, myself, and I.

Comments

[hai-kah-uhk.livejournal.com]

I like these.

And yes, I CAN have the dream!

[hummingwolf.livejournal.com]

Hooray!

[mariness.livejournal.com]

The last two lines here:

with a livejournal account, you can have the dream,
the hand of honest feedback. It's not permanent.

Are almost entirely perfect :)

[hummingwolf.livejournal.com]

HAL is glad you approve. :-)

[pnksaph.livejournal.com]

Silhouetted against the words,

I love the imagery here. When our words and our actions don't quite mesh, or when pleasant words try to cover the grimace of pain or anger, this phrase fits perfectly.

[hummingwolf.livejournal.com]

HAL does come up with good ones sometimes.